And the winner is...
And they want another deleted scene.
Again, I should stipulate that this scene was cut for a reason. Parts of it will look familiar since they were included in the final book (just in a different place).
But I always liked the idea of this scene (it seems like a pop quiz Joe Solomon would love to give), and I'm glad it's finally going to see the light of day.
The setup: this scene took place after Cammie learned that Zach has lost his parents.
Enjoy!
Ally
Following Joe Solomon into the CoveOps elevator brought a strange set of emotions to the surface. On one hand, he is Joe Solomon (and close proximity to six junior spy boys hadn’t diminished his hotness.) On the other, there were about a million other things I wanted to be doing. But I also knew I couldn’t do anything about any of them—not really. So I was glad to be locked inside that elevator. It felt good to follow him through the maze of Sublevel One.
I wanted a mission—a task, a purpose. And when he said, “I suppose you know what this is,” I was relieved to look at the big steel door in front of me.
“It’s the Safetronic
He smiled. “That’s right. We just got it in.” He kicked the steel door like a used car salesman kicks tires. “It’s the best commercially-available safe in the world—just the type of thing an operative might encounter in the field.”
I ran my hands across the smooth shiny surface. “It’s uncrackable.”
He laughed. “I hope not.”
And then he pushed me inside.
***
As much as I dearly love being a Gallagher Girl sometimes, it kind of cramps my style—especially when pushed and locked inside the world’s best safe. On a great TV night. When I have a headache.
And when I’m not alone.
I heard the laughter behind me and turned to see the hollow, empty room that might have been a suburban garage. If all garages are made from titanium and are located
“Well, he said he was bringing me company,” Zach said slowly. Then he shook his head. “I should have known.” He smiled. “So, shall we get cozy?”
“NO!” I snapped and he laughed. That’s right. Actual laughter. I could have killed him then, and there would have been no witnesses (but I also would have been the only person with means and opportunity, so I didn’t.) I sauntered over to the locks. “We get to work.”
My focus narrowed; my fingers flew. There’s something so liberating about finding a zone, being free of thought and doubts and relying on instinct, on action. Everything faded away. I focused on the mechanisms, tried to shake them from my mind, remembered that life was like that assignment—unlocking one door at a time, and the longer I stood there the more I felt myself fade away, my consciousness go on cruise control until…
“Wow, you’re super cute when you focus.”
“ZACH!”
He made a show of looking around the empty room. “Yeah, must have been.”
“Just… Just be quiet and let me—"
“No, I mean it. You get this little wrinkly thing.” He held his thumb and forefinger to the center of his forehead. “Right here. It’s just cute as—"
“Do you want to stay in here all night?” I snapped.
He leaned against the wall beside me, crossed his arms. “Might as well.” Then he looked around the room. “I’ve stayed in worse.”
But then my stomach growled. (Please tell me he didn’t hear that. Please tell me he didn’t hear that.) “Well, I—" It growled again. Louder. (Please tell me he’ll at least ACT like he didn’t hear that.)
“I’ve got homework.”
“Yeah.” He chuckled then interlaced his fingers and stretched his arms out, popping his knuckles. “Gotta study hard, get ready for that next mission.”
I so didn’t want to have that fight. Not then. Not ever. Sadly because I’ve been trained not to start fights I can’t win. The boys had beaten us. We knew the rules. We did our best. They just did…better.
I stared at the mechanisms my fingers seemed frozen to. “Look, I—"
“Why don’t you ever ask me about it?” he asked, and I couldn’t help myself, I looked at him, but he just glanced away. Something lingered in the air between us, and I knew he wasn’t talking about missions or homework or anything else that only seems important when you’re sixteen. It was a different Zach entirely who said, “I’ll tell you mine if you’ll tell me yours.”
Maybe it was the impenetrable door, the six feet of solid steel that surrounded us on all sides. We had to come to a vault for Zach to let his defenses fall, and at that moment he reminded me of a bird that had fallen from its nest. I started to reach for him, to comfort him, but then I remembered Grandpa Morgan’s warnings that there are some wild things you’re not supposed to touch.
“It was a mission.”
I don’t know why I said it. The words were foreign to me—not English—not something I had ever said, and yet they slid so effortlessly from my throat they must have been back there, fully formed, for years waiting for that chance to seep free.
“My dad went on a mission. He didn’t come home. Nobody knows what…happened.”
Then Zach looked at me. “Somebody knows.”
And then the lock miraculously turned. The tumblers fell into place. The door swung open, a metallic grating sound echoing through the still, quiet room, Zach’s haunting words following me as I started up the stairs.

163 Comments:
OMG I WANNA KNOW WAT HAPPENS AFTER THAT!!! ITS SO INTERESTING CAN U POST WAT HAPPENS NEXT
there is no scene after, really. This is just a different time and place for the conversation that made it into the book. So what happens next in the book IS what happens next.
-Ally
Ally carter, there are a few things about wrighting that even authers dont know, i am not an auther or anywere near being one, you may no this,but you may not. There are a few things that make a great romance novel 3 hearts, 3 stories, and moltable casualties. There are also a few things that make a good spy book. lieying, from someone you know will lie, truth from someone who usually lies, lies from someone who usually tells the truth, and once again many casualties, though your first book was amzing your second book made you my faivorite author,(okay you tied with stephany meyeer(:
you are an amzing auther and i would die if you quit wrighting
thx, for all your wonderfull stories,
warm regards,
Amanda
ahh that was great
thanks
ohhh.....i knew that
huh what r u guys talking about???
Thanks for giving us the deleted scene! and it had Zach too! you get some bonus points for that one! I love it when in some books that there is a momentary verbal "removing of the mask" where a character who is always carefully guarded, and shrouded in secrecy, let's there imaginary mask or cover fall for just a moment an u see that they are vulnerable and just as messed up as we are, even tho they don't show it. Those times and moments are what MAKE a book, and make the characters in it believable, human and REAL. So thank you so much for being the wonderful author that u are and maybe if i am lucky, like win the lottery lucky, maybe i will be as good as you!
-Aspiring Author, 13
p.s. i really can't wait for the GG3 book! it's one of the many series additions i have been waiting for! Seriously i feel like all the books i want to read aren't out yet! Bratfest at Tiffany's by Lisi Harrison, Breaking Dawn by Stephenie Meyer, Lock and Key by Sarah Dessen, the next book in the Dairy Queen saga and for the next GG book!
Oh my gosh! I LOVE that scene!!!!!! It's wonderful. That you soooooo much for posting it! It made my day!
I LOVE THIS SCENE!! reading it just made my day :) !!! thanks ally!!
OMGSH that was an AMAZING scene! i love Zach, hes so funny, mysterious, and kinda heroic. I wish i knew when the next book is coming out. You are by far my favorite author, and these books are by far my favorite books.
OMG!! THat scene was amazing Ally. Keep up the good work.
I think I just hyper ventalated...BUT IN A GOOD WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE ALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I HAVE TO SEE ANOTHER SEEN NO JOKE.. IM Emailing my BFF right after I FINISH TYPING THIS AND SHE IS GOING TO HYPERVENTILATE TOO! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmm... I love Zach...HE HAS TO BE IN THE NEXT BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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P.S Zach has the best sacasim/comecacks/hot jokes/perfect use of swear words ever!!!!!!!!!! OMG! I mean farsi...seriously...:):):)
U ROCK ALLY!!
OMG! That was such a good scene! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do a deleted scene with Joh in it please!
OMG! That was such a good scene! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do a deleted scene with Josh in it please!
Ms.Carter why don't you actually put this in the BOOK???!!!!
WHY??!!!
but it's OK I think it worth it...:D
:D THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!
You're LIKE "DA BEST"!!!!
MORE PLEASE????if you still have some more deleated scenes that is....:D
*grin*
*puppy dog eyes*
PS:although I never master it...hehe..:)
:0
:P
Nite'
AND I WOULD DIE IF YOU DON'T WRITE ANYMORE!!!!:((..Not that I want you to die that'll make me some kind of villain and people with pitchforks,and guns WILL come after me.....
(I'm digging my grave write now...:( )
GG3 GG3 GG3 GG3 GG3 GG3 GG3 GG3
i love this scene! but i dont really get what is going on. is it on mission just for zach and cammie and they have to get out of the room? love it!
I LOVE< LOVE< LOVED that scene i mean amazing and yet still no words to describe. These are my fave books not second to any other book. thanks ssssssssssssssoooooooo much please give me more deleted scenes. this one made my day becuase its sssoooo awful outside this is xactly what i needed. I just told my best friend abby to read it i think shes going to hyperventalate i know i am. thanks sssssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.
P.S.- please post more deleted scenes, anyone of them please!!!!!
Ah! I love deleted scenes!
<3 Renee
i know a lot of people like deleted scenes with Zach in them but i'd really like one with Josh in it. Don't get me wrong, i like Zach too, but in the deleted scenes and Cross My Heart, there wasn't a lot of Josh. Please Ally, Please post a deleted scene with Josh in it!!!! i don't even care what book it's from as long as Josh is in it!!
-Curly
Well, I was going to leave some comment about how wonderful that was...
And what an amazing author you are...
And how I cannot wait until the next one comes out...
Or until I get up off my butt to go buy your other books...
But I was beat to it.
So I will just say one thing...
Ditto.
i know a lot of people like deleted scenes with Zach in them but i'd really like one with Josh in it. Don't get me wrong, i like Zach too, but in the deleted scenes and Cross My Heart, there wasn't a lot of Josh. Please Ally, Please post a deleted scene with Josh in it!!!! i don't even care what book it's from as long as Josh is in it!!
-Curly
Zach is so funny! I love the part when he's like "Wow, you’re super cute when you focus."
hey....Ms.CArter care to explain...why all of the teacher in the book keep pushing Cammie,and Zach together??!!!
HUH??HUH??HUH???
WHY??I wanna know!!!
ok... 2 questions.....
1) Y wasn't that amazingly awesome scene in the book?!?!
and 2) Y WASNT THE SCENE LONGER?! I LOVE ZACH TIME!!!!!!!
i no these questions r retorical and all, but i was just curious.....
LOVE LOVE LOVE THAT SCENE!!!!
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~ari :o)
omg!!omn!!:P this was totally awesome, you totally have to put more up !!!!!! we love you ally!!!!! you rock!
plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz put up more deleted scenes.
<3<3<3 ya, yell.ow.sjf
put Josh in the next deleted scene plz. this one rox but i really want some josh-action. and zach-josh rivalry.
luv ya's
love it! but do you have any deleted scenes with JOSH!!! I LOVE HIM!!!
This was amazing!! Mr. Soloman just went up another ten points in my book - that assignment was awesome!! I LOVED his repsonse to Cammie's comment about it being uncrackable!! "I hope not." This was perfect!!
If you put up any more deleted scenes do you think you could put one up with Josh in it? As much as everyone else seems to love Zach, I LOVE JOSH!!!!! Please??
You ROCK Ally!! Keep up the amazing work!!!
Okay so i love that scene its awesome. and i somewhat agree with what "amanda" said but with out all the typos and spelling mistakes. English isnt my favorite subject but stuff like that really gets to me i dont know why, im never gramatically correct (as seen above). Anyway thanks for the scene it was great!
yay zach!!
I <3 any scenes with zach in them...and this one was hysterical!! it's like getting bonus features...yay bonus features!!
okay...i'm starting to sound like a complete dork...
*cough* anyways...another great scene as usual!! can't wait to read Kat and GG3. i'm sure they'll be beyond awesome!! ^_^
Briana
OMG THAT WAS AWSOME!! i LOVED the part wear Zach said that Cammie looked cute when shes' working! LOL! I <3 Zach!! i only have like two fictional guy characters from books ( so far ) that i wish were real and they are :
# 1, Zach Goode
# 2, Mr. Darcy
which, when you think about it, they both have kind of the same personality. i dont know, they just seem alot alike to me.
CANT WAIT FOR GG3!!
-gallaghergirl95
OMG!! I love this scene. I really like how Zach says "super cute". It sounds soooo sweet. NEED MORE. Don't ever run out of deleted scenes!! Ur the best!! THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!
OM THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ POST DA SCENE DAT COMES B4 or AFTER!!!
i lovee that zach is so annoying in that really cute way!!
ok Ally, U rock...no really u do...but please never run out of deleted scenes...you can make them up for all care i mean ur a writer and ur wonderful at the whole zach thing. Poor zach...he's soguarded yet so alone and innocent...
and a total hottie!to bad he's not real enough to here that...:)
OMN!!! That was sooooo amazing! I loved it! I think it would have been really funny if when Cammie's tummy growled she would have said, "Where's those MM's when you need them?"
That would have been all-fours-on-the-floor funny!
there is zachs faviorite line SOMEBODY KNOWS tehe i like it!!!!!alot
OMG I LOVE THAT SCENE!!!!!!! I WANT T OKNOW WHAT COMES NEXT!!!! PLEASE TELL US ALLY!!! THAT IS SO AWESOME .... OMG I LOVED IT!!!
ALLY!! YOU SHOULD HAVE LEEEEEFT THAT SCENE!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS PERFECTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UGH...I LOVE ZACK...**)
Another one!! please!! another one!!!!!!! :D
ok, wats zachs story?!?!?! I WANNA KNO! he said i'll tell u mine.....
so wat happened to his parents?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?
will u PLEASE tell us?!?!
let's go over 100
yahh...THT WAS GREAT ALLY!!! but yahh.... how come mr solomon always has cammie partner up with zach?? does he know tht they like eachother or something??? hmmm...
OH YAHHH!!! AND HE NEVER SAID HIS STORY???????
oh my god that was really good. thx for posting another deleted scene. i can't wait for another. well i gtg talk to ya later
Yes I won
Oh my GOSH, I love these deleted scenes! And plus, Zach was in this one. I love Zach because he's so...mysterious, and I love to see his vulnerable, soft side. That was what I really loved about CMH. I absolutely cannot wait until the next book comes out. Will you have a release date soon? That would be great because honestly, I'm in agony! I MUST know what happens...but I'm just strange like that when it comes to books. Haha, can't wait for the trilogy!
I know you don't have any part in the cast choosing for the movie. . .but do you at least know where they are and when they're taking place? They would be sooooo cool to watch! I also want to know what the next book is called so I can get it. luv the deleted scenes
<3 nike
Thanx Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Much!!!
-Carm
omg i officiality LOVE YOU! like seriously my 15th b-day is tomorrow so this is a pretty sick present/reward! honestly your such a great writer thank you so much for writing this series its one of my all time fav!
-Sana<3
THANKS! oh my gosh i so WANTED a deleted scene! I love this and it kills me to know ill have to wait of the thrid one. write as fast as you can!!!!!! i mean seriously im DYING here. literaly. well, okay not literally. but i REAAALLLLYYY want to know what happenes with Cammie. And Zach. And EVERYONE!
you are my absolute favorite author!
-Athena Levesque
omg..i love that scene so much. i love when he said she was super cute. that was funny. zach said that he has stayed in worse places. what are those worse places. r they at blackthorne? or some place else. that is confusing me. again, i love the scene but i can see why it didnt make it. plus, in the book scene i like how she banged her head and he was nice. please give us another scene soon!
i loved it but kinda hoped it was a lil longer...
still great!!!
=]
wow that was sooooooooooooo awsome please please pleas post another one
p.s. please
I can not wait till GG3 comes out and i mean i cant wait. I need to know what the title will be, What the plot line is, and when it is comeing out and i mean i need to know fast or i will go even crazier then i all ready am. Trust me i am very crazy it would not be good if i go even crazier.
what does zack mean by "i've stayed in worse"
that was a good deleted scene.. I liked it... I have a question though... is there like ever something that you cut out that isn't really necissary to the plot, but you still imagine it happening in your head? or you still think of it as really happening to Cammie? if there is could you post it? that is if you still have it and didn't delete it. :) thanx! (and yes you are my favorite author thats why I'm giving you this annoying request) lol
ughhhhh
im so upset i really wanted to get a feel for your new one. =0 im sad of what the people have voted):
BUT ITS A GREAATTT SCENE. hahah. sorry im such a downer. keep it up ally
Okay adding to the list of guy charachters I wish were real
A)Zach Goode
B)Mr. Darcy
and C)...
EDWARD CULLEN!!! (sorry I know it's the wrong book but that would be really awesome. anyway
Ally, or Ms. Carter ... I do like Josh but, ZACH IS TOTALLY AWESOME
I would love it if there was more ZACH in GG3, but it's your book so I'm not going to tell you what to do. :)
I know I already left a comment but I was getting a bit ... defensive about Zach because people kept leaving multiple comments about how they wanted more josh.
Anyhow you're and AWESOME AUTHOR (I know a ton of people have told you that but they really did mean it, and so do I) :)
KaT,
p.s. It just occured to me while I was reading comments that my nickname is the same as Kat's from the new story your writting but my stands for Katherine is the only difference. :)
thanks for posting that please post another deleted scene. i loved that one, but wut is zach's story? do we find out in the 3rd book.
p.s. thanks and i really would like to know
I LOVE ZACH!!!! OMG! HE IS SO CUTE! I KEEP READING THIS SCENE OVER AND OVER!
<3 Renee
mmmmmmmmm...zach
ally............
I absolutely love the deleted scene!!:D
MORE???PWEASE....
Wow...a deleted scene with Zach and Mr. Solomon? I can't believe I haven't passed out yet from all of the hotness in that scene! I know everyone always asks why you don't put the deleted scenes in the book. I don't. I always see why you delete them. Don't get me wrong, I love the scenes, but the ones that end up in the book are always better in some way or another. It is more like Cammie and Zach's behaviour to meet outside one of her secret passageways. Although, that was a good idea for a CoveOps assignment...
*Marina*
OMG Ally i ♥ LOVED ♥ that scene!
Keep Zach Coming. He is adorable!
Omg i cant wait to find out when everything new comes out!
JW about how many books will there be??
THANKS!!
this scene is amazing!
i love it.
i love zach.
i love mr.solomon.
i love cammie.
it seems like zach and cammie are always getting put together. not that i mind cause like i said, i love zach! i wish the scene was alittle longer. i love when mr.solomon says i hope not and then pushes cammie in the room. and when zach says, wow, you're super cute when you're focus. he is so funny/annoying. but when cammie asked zach if he wanted to sleep in there all night, zach said he has had worse. what/why has he had worse?
i watched house a few nights ago. and i think house's hair cut and unshaveness reminds me of mr.solomon. but nothing else cause house isnt hot. wow, that was kind of random!
please post another deleted scene!
loved it!!! thanks so much! please keep writing... and post another scene!!! you are like my fav author!!! keep up the good work <33
wow... AMAZING SCENE!
That was so good!!! Why did you take it out of the book?
cool scene. i hope that u post more, Ally. That would be really cool. Just one question, Why did Solomon push Cammie in the vault in the first place? to see if she could focs with an annoying( but hot) boy trapped in with her?
--Nikki
i agree with some of the girls on here that were asking about what Zach meant when he said " I've stayed in worse. " i wonder what he was talking about?? and he was supposed to tell Cammie what happend to his parents but he never did! does he tell her in the 3rd book?? is Zach going to be in GG3?? IMPORTANT QUESTIONS!! : )
-gallaghergirl95
I'm SO proud of miyself!!!!!!!!!! This is only the 4th time i've cheked this blog tonight...YAY!
Ally,
I love your book and that deleated scene was awsome. Now you have to give us the other option!!!!! I sooo want to know what the other book is about!! Hope ya do.
Ally, why are you such an amazing author? I mean, it's crazy how great you are at writing! I am so excited for GG3!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ally,
I've got to hand it to you. You rock. [end pf story]
but hopefully not...
keep writing!!!!!
we love you!!!!!
wut happens after.
plz.
tell me.
awesum scene. i totally luv josh and i wish i had mr. so 4 a teach. i really need 2 ask this tho: DON'T U HAVE ANY DELETED SCENES W/ JOSH IN 'EM????!!! i still luv u tho! my fav part of this scene is when zach says cam's super cute when she focuses.
also, my list of boys i wish were real is:
1. EDWARD CULLEN (i LUV him. he's sooooooo mazing!!!)
2. ZACH GOODE (i luv that whole mystery/good/annoying/hot theme he's got goin' on)
3. JOSH ABRAMS (he is so sweet and nice and caring and is probably one of the best BF a girl could eva have)
4. JON OF CONTE (he may b a conceited butt-head but there's sumthin about him that i like)
5. PRINCE CHAR (i used 2 b in love w/ him when i always read ella enchanted and nutin else, he's so... charming)
6. JACK SWIFT (he's strong, brave, nice, good, and doesn't like 2 give up)
7. UH!!! THERE R SOOOOO MANY MORE GUYS FROM BOOKS THAT I WISH WERE REAL I CAN'T NAME THEM ALL AND THEY LEAVE MY HEAD!!!!!!!!!
(if u haven't noticed already i read A LOT!! seriously all my friends have called me a bookworm at least once this school year!!!!)
also, i have a few q's.
1. what's zach's story
2. what's mr. solomon's story
3. what's cammie's dad's story
4. why were cam and zach put in the vault in the 1st place
5. what did zach mean about staying in worse
6. are zach and/or josh gonna b in any future books
and 7. why can't i choose btween zach and josh
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
also what is w/ me and 7 q's???????
That scene totally rocked!! But I can see why you took it out. It's a tad bit out of character. My favorite lines were "So, shall we get cozy?" and "Wow, you're super cute when you focus" both of which from Zach. Is that his way of flirting with Cammie because if it is, it was sooooo cute. Please put up more deleted scenes up, and this time could they have Josh in them????? Pretty please with sugar on top? I love reading these scenes. Sometimes it's the most interesting thing I get to do all day!!!!!!!! So pretty pretty please put up a deleted scene up that has Josh AND Zach. Maybe even some rivalry between the two. That would be awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE you, seriously you're just soooooo amazing!
girlie girl
Awesome scene. I think you should we the peeps that comment on your blogs should set up our own fan page or something. It would be so fun and then we wouldn't have to have whole conversations on your comment boards all though I don't really mind doing that. I just think it would be fun to start up a fan page!!
I send you love!!
the mysterious one...
so yeah i jsut finished the second book about 10 minutes ago.. so i desided to sign onto the website and BAM there was a "deleted sence" love it. made my night. i cannot wait till the next book.
oo i wanted kat!!! sob sob. watever tho, that was a really good scene. y did you cut it out? great job ally
that was really cool
So when Zack was first introduced I didn't like him, because I was like what about Josh?, but as kept reading I started him liking more and more. And I really liked this deleted scene, it only made me like Zack more. He has this cocky charm about him and it's good that he knows when to turn it off. I think this was a really good deleted scene and it would been awesome in the book. =)
Ok i just wanted to say i love your books!
Anyways i was reading I'd tell you i love you be then id have to kill you pg 253 and i turned the page and it was back to page 248, it totally skipped 254 and i was wondering if maybe you could post it on here?
Katie
wow thats is soo cool!!!!!!!
yeah well im supposed to writing a history essay on the Living Conditions of the Working Class People in Industrial Towns in the 19th Century >> but i got bored so now im here lol (^-^)
I have to say, Ally, this is by far my favourite deleted scene that you've posted yet.
I didn't take part in the "100 comments" thing but I get the reward! :P
I think all those comments show either the same people commenting over and over, or other people are coming to this site. Word-of-mouth or obsessiveness?
Brings me to an interesting question...would you rather have a few obsessive fans, or lots of half-fans (as in...not obsessive)?
♥♥ the deleted scene :)
this is my fav scene so far! it has zach AND mr.solomon! my fav lines are when mr.s says i hope not, when zach says shall we get cozy, and my favfavfav is when zach says wow, you're super cute when you focus. i love it! i love the way he flirts with cammie. it makes him alll the more fun. and i love his cocky charm. it makes him seem more realistic. josh seemed a little too perfect but we can seee that zach isnt perfect. and i like how he makes fun of cammie. not that i like seeing cammie get made fun of. but its cute on zachs part. it shows he really likes her. please post aanother deleted scene!
OMG ok you have to keep poasting deleted scenes any scene it really doesn't matter, but I think it would really help us with waiting for the next book to come out it will really help keep us all scane entill GG3 comes out I know it helps me keep my sanity.
That really shows how Cammie can let her guard down for a minute, though I thought it was cool that right after she talked about her dad they got out. I guess it helped her to think of him.
i really like that scene!! i like how they are trapped inside the safe, i thought it was funny! i also really like zach in this scene, because you get to see both sides of him in the one scene, his funny, charming, little sarcastic side, and then his soft, a little vulnerable side... i thought it was really good.
jennifer-katherine:
you forgot:
4) JACOB BLACK!!!
haha
again, can we see a scene where zach is more likeable? he always acts like such a jerk.
does zach have that multiple personality disorder? he can never stick to one side....it gets kind of frustrating..
but thanks for the scene anyway. any closer to being done with GG3?
Hi Ally,
I'm one of your newest fans since I just finished reading both Love you/Kill You and Cross My Heart. I have to say that they truly are the most AWESOMEST books ever!! I can't put 'em down once I've started! I can't WAIT until the next ones come out! Thanks SO much!You're the best!
That was so awesome ally!!!!
OMG!!!!!! I like the idea of it! It was really good!!!! And if you ever feel like posting another (please) then maybe it could be about Josh! Because even though Zach and Cammie are so meant to be and even though I love Zach, I want to know what Josh remembers!!!
<3 charlotte
pmg..this is my new fav scene. i love how it shows differet sides of zach in just a few minutes. he is cocky, flirty, funny, charming, and soft. i love this scene but i can se why it wasnt in the book. i love how zach and cammie r always getting pushed together. is that happening for a reason. does rachel or/and mr.solomon have a motive? i want to know. i love the idea of the cove ops exercise. maybe something similar to that could be in the next book.!? i cant wait till gg3. i check this site a lot! maybe we could have another scene!???
That was an awesome scene Ally. One question. Why didn't you put it in the book??? Plese post another deleted scene
hey ally,
i agree with curly. i would like to see a deleted scene with Josh in it. i also like the ones with Zach, but i haven't seen anything about Josh yet.
-rainbow
Awesome scene Ally. Your an awesome author.
Ally:
since we now have another 100 comments, can we now see the beginning of Kat?? PLEASE?!?!?!
sara:
i also like jon of conte, and those are way good books...
why do people keep forgetting to have Jacob Black on their lists?!?! cuz, he is like amazing.
zach 9is so hot i dont know about you guys but i would choose him over josh i mean sure josh was her first fling but zach i mean, uh H-O-T!!!! AND BESIDES WHO WOULDENT WANT TO DATE A SUPER COOL SPY GUY???
uh... I HATE JACOB BLACK!! no offense to anyone in love with him but he annoys the crap out of me with all of his i love bella and "edward should just leave bella" (i agree with jacob on that one because edward should be mine!!)
anyways, LOVE the scene but i can see why it wasn't in the book. BUT PLEASE PUT UP A DELETED SCENE WITH JOSH IN IT!!!!! I WANT TO HEAR MORE ABOUT HIM!!
thanks~ froggie_woggie
anonymous:
thanx my sista says that i'm old-fashioned & only like him 'cause he's a prince & that any normal person wood like george but i don't like george. mayb it's b/c he's King of the